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I've Made No Mistake
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 06:18:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Do you really love me?
You solemnly claim to
Should I trust you?
I have nothing else to do
I am a skeptic
When it comes to love
You are perfect
An honest gift from above
When I look in the mirror
Baby you have nothing to compare
To the sheer terror
Of the monster that I see there
I recall everything bad
That I have ever done
I remember, regretfully
The times I held that gun
I know you cannot comprehend
This abhor against myself
I own lament that I cannot mend
A past I can't put on a shelf
Life is empty like this
There's nothing I can say
Dwelling on truth's last kiss
I know for sure I love you today
I cannot promise forever
Broken promises I don't make
Yet I know what's in my heart
And I've made no mistake
Copyright ©
weepingprophet
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2006-02-28 18:18:51]
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Re: I've Made No Mistake
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 06:55:02 PM AEST
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Re: I've Made No Mistake
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by boobiepeach on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:14:57 PM AEST
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i love to go back and find old notbooks from highschool and things i have written long ago.
its always nice to look back at feeling you thought were so strong or maybe still are
great write
peach |
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Re: I've Made No Mistake
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by funnyface on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 08:41:58 PM AEST
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FINDING POEMS YOU HAD FORGOTTEN ABOUT IS LIKE FINDING YOURSELF ALL OVER AGAIN
THAT TIME HAS PUT ON HOLD . GREAT WRITE
THANKS FOR SHARING.
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