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I Realize
Contributed by
forgottenone_iam
on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 09:45:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It was only a while ago when i
used to think love was a heart-
ache ready to happen.
Until i met someone like you,
i thought in my mind someone
like you will never like someone
like me.
Then it happend something
you did to me, something i
cant explain.
I remember the first day i
talked to you, the way you
would look in my eyes as
you spoke.
I was told when you find the
one never let them go, hold
on to them forever.
When i met you i was hoping
i would get a chance with you,
I knew that feelings like this
just couldnt be wrong.
I remember the feeling like i
loved you and i wondered if
you felt the same.
Your the only person i wanted to
be with, i spent all night thinking
about you, wondering if you could
ever be mine.
Your mine and i'm never letting
you go.
You now know everything about
me, every dream, every hope,
every fear, how to love me
dearly and how to wipe away
all my tears.
Your the one for me.
Your everything to me, everything
i wanted, you listen to what i say,
you always bring a smile to my
face, you make all my fears and
problems disappear.
We have a love that counts, our
love gets stronger everyday we
are together.
From now on i realize that
real love is forever.
And forever is with you.
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2006-02-28 21:45:36]
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Re: I Realize
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lady_Daisy on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 10:05:35 PM AEST
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I felt that you needed to use more passionate words. Also if you respect your work, I'd advise you to capitalize your 'I's'. All but that, keep up the work sweetie, you’ll improve with everything you write! Don’t give up! Keep reading poetry it helps.
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