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My death lily
Contributed by
Lady_Daisy
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Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 09:59:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I saw the death lily they placed upon my casket,
at once I knew I had to pick up where I left off.
My scars I have seen, carved by an unknown hand
And now I know the pain I endured from my mistakes.
Its my fault, said to be faultless flaws, but I very much doubt.
My angel so nave, and so trusting I wish to see another one.
Angels are scarce in my part of the world, their grants arent of worth.
So who is hurting now? Knowledge, or a lack of, I do not know.
And what I saw, as they laid me in my final place-
Wilting gardens, my darlings with tears trickling down their faces
I refuse to see their pain; I refuse to see their domain turn to dark.
I know they wont survive; thus my death lily can wilt by its self.
Copyright ©
Lady_Daisy
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2006-02-28 21:59:19]
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Re: My death lily
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by thesinner on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 10:00:51 PM AEST
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| very moving |
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Re: My death lily
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:59:24 AM AEST
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Beautifully dark, tremendously poetic.
Well Done!
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Re: My death lily
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by Leslie on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:19:00 PM AEST
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| Your poem dealt with a very interesting and difficult concept. I thought it was well written and touched on the dark side of mankind's psyche. |
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