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So Divine - A Sonnet
Contributed by
wizard
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Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:11:34 AM in AEST
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If the maiden day of spring
Could sing its tender song,
For you its symphony would bring
A masterpiece yearlong.
And if the setting sun mislaid
Its reason to return,
Your radiance would pervade
And the darkness you'd adorn.
Or if angels were to pray,
To you they would implore...
And inquire of your splendid way,
Then..they'd learn to soar!
For you my world revolves my sweet
And just your thought makes me complete
Copyright ©
wizard
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2006-03-01 11:11:34]
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:54:45 AM AEST
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awww what a beautiful and romantic write.
great job :) |
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by slogan on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 12:04:39 PM AEST
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| I really like this one...jh |
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 01:12:47 PM AEST
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*huge sighs*
oh my, dear Paul! What an absolute BEAUTY!
A magnificent piece of tender loveliness!
Wonderfully laid down and oh god, so bloody emotive! With each line
it just gets softer and more brilliant. Incredibly "heart-hugging".
I love this altogether. A singularly sweet piece of poetic perfection.
Those last two lines . . . good lord, how positively moving and
inspiring. Almost like a whispered sigh. Gosh, I can't say
enough how this one touched me. The composition itself
is outstanding, but the word choices are so ... uhm ... divine. lol
Yeah . . . perfectly titled!
Très belle !!
~Breezy |
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by twick on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 01:13:22 PM AEST
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| I think sonnets are harder to write because of their structure. You did a great job. |
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 02:20:09 PM AEST
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words danced with a soft flow of romance, nicely done.
Michelle |
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 02:52:55 PM AEST
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Well done, Paul...Such a beautiful poem...
Hats off to you!!
Jenni |
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 05:48:21 PM AEST
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~*Paul*~
Roxie sums it all up.
A divine sonnet penned to perfection.
An outstanding sonnet written by a very gifted and talented poet. Well done ~*Paul*~
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by brew on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 10:21:57 PM AEST
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A frewell, yet NOT forever in the bleekness of the heart.
Just beautiful.........Romantic, and so sleek. They will find their way back.
Loved the free flow of all the words.
Brew~ |
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 01:15:58 AM AEST
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Beautiful work bro-
...written with such tender discipline..
well placed italics as well..great emphasis
"If the maiden day of spring
Could sing its tender song
For you its symphony would bring
A masterpiece yearlong"
amazing..
B |
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 03:43:51 PM AEST
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| Your poem is very encouraging: It has depth, emotion and a resonating tone that keeps the reader enthralled til the end. Nice write. |
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:14:46 PM AEST
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a most beautiful lyric poem, your sonnet.. a most wonderful meditating voice you gave to this write..
RL |
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by Lucid_Tides on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 03:37:25 PM AEST
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| This is a great read. The mental thoughts that are projected are easily understood. Great for romance. Awesome. |
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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 10:37:37 AM AEST
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How very sigh-inducing Paul!!! What a splendid piece; it really makes the reader smile while reading this. It flows along great as well. Very well done; I enjoyed this.
Scorp. |
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