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Shades
Contributed by
wakegurl77
on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 06:55:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i love the way the water moves
it reminds me of life
constantly changing
constantly moving around
switching places
it glistens in certian light
moving rapidly and catching the glow
like life speeds and shimmers when we marry or
eat an especailly good bit of chocolate
and then it has those shady spots
and dark daring shadows
where movement is sparce and slow
its like our down and out moments
death, divorice, broken hearts
then theres the inbetween
the vast majority of the water
its close to darkness
but almost light
it moves more rapidly than the dark
will never surpass the light
it is the intermediate, stuck inbetween
between light and dark
between life and death
moving closer slightly
but never truely succseeding
to reach those seldom
glimpses of the glory of the glistening lit water
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2006-03-01 18:55:58]
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Re: Shades
(User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 07:03:23 PM AEST
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| You write well of the fluidity of water. I grasp the hope this work brings. Building to the greater good. Nicely done. |
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