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Cosmic Sledgehammer
Contributed by
macgyver_dk
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Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 01:22:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Cosmic Sledgehammer
Directives not written in stone,
Decisions made sub conscience and alone,
Stars cosmically, overhead in a dome,
Future mistakes a constant unknown,
Opened mouth without a doubt,
Unthought spoken words which just spill out,
Sometimes wise, sometimes felt,
A simple slip, words can shout,
Regretted speech, maybe yes or maybe no,
The truth does hurt, or so I m told,
Can one be to blunt? or be to bold?
Should one hide? Should one fold?
Rest assure we learn from our mistakes,
Sometimes once, or two takes,
The cosmic sledgehammer does not hesitate,
To slam thy down, to make you wake,
With every blow, we shall learn,
With every blow, respect well earn,
With every blow, the past will burn,
With every blow, we get a new turn,
So hop right on and take a ride,
The past will hurt, but it will subside,
Learn from our mistakes, no tears, no cries,
Learn from the past, from the hammer,
Cause the Cosmic Sledgehammer is on your side..........
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Re: Cosmic Sledgehammer
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by grin69 on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 03:03:01 AM AEST
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| WOW!!! I love, love, love this poem!!! So the "Cosmic Sledgehammer" is GOD? This is th best poem I've read tonight. |
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Re: Cosmic Sledgehammer
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 06:00:02 AM AEST
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| well done, a joy to read. |
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Re: Cosmic Sledgehammer
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by Shmokin on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 06:26:12 AM AEST
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| excellent write, enjoyed it a lot, thanx for sharing :-) |
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Re: Cosmic Sledgehammer
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by BSteel on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 07:11:45 AM AEST
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i gotta say wow, thanks for sharing that
beyoned well done that is rare!
Sincerly,
Bsteel |
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