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Suicide, Depression, and Pain
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
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Suicide, Depression, and Pain
They work together the 3 in 1
The Trinity if you will
I am intimate with all 3
The Triune Bringers of Sadness
I could call them my friends,
But that's to loose a term
I have debated with suicide
Many days and nights
I have cried with depression
Grieved with it as well
And Pain? Oh Pain!
My Great Comforter. I lust for its company
With Suicide I have dined
With his friends Razor and Knife
I have become well acquainted
They have made their mark on my body
Burned their memory into my soul
They have chased away depression
And summoned Pain
But Depression returns with ferocity
Not to be left out or forgotten
It incapacitates me with its covering
And everything around me
Becomes soaked in my tears
Suicide it knows my name
Calls on my I can't hide
Oh, I can, but nor for long
I am always found
Dragged into the open where my senses are drugged
Pain I can hear her crooning call
Stroking me with her evil fangs
And lusty glair
Beckoning me into her lair
Seducing me with false promises
I have danced with Suicide
Cheek to cheek while struggling
To extract myself from its icy grip
Eyes blinded with tears
As I fall into its cold embrace
Suicide, Depression, and Pain
Willicide, Agression, and Shame
They are my shadow
Enveloping me in their grotesque smile
Taking what they will
And leaving no shred or remnant of happiness
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2003-01-29 10:00:00]
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Re: Suicide, Depression, and Pain
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by me_n_me_alone on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 10:59:25 AM AEST
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Great write Bobo. I love poems in thes theme settings...or whatever you call it. Anyway .....Great write!!!
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Re: Suicide, Depression, and Pain
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by Dani on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 11:13:01 AM AEST
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| There's no doubt about it. Joel... you have an amazing talent!! Never stop writing! |
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Re: Suicide, Depression, and Pain
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by D-Day on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 11:17:55 AM AEST
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| This is a good poem, and I can really relate to it because I have done all those things. It's hard to deal with, but keep writting because I know in my case it helps to write about it. |
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Re: Suicide, Depression, and Pain
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by Eternal_Darkness on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 12:22:09 PM AEST
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| This is definitely an interesting piece. The way that you describe suicide, depression, and pain and the way that they work together is excellent. Thank you for sharing this. It's almost like a kind of insight for us who have been there. |
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Re: Suicide, Depression, and Pain
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 01:35:18 PM AEST
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again well written strong message...
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Re: Suicide, Depression, and Pain
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 12:30:24 AM AEST
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| you know joel, you've such talent, i much prefer the poem you wrote of your love, your mind is brilliant, your soul sweet, your heart good and true an' a real poet's, we all feel an' think these things, why not just for a while, try some other topics? this write is excellent, don't get me wrong, the depth of your word usage could be directed to some fine dark poetry... imho.. luv & hugs always nessa |
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Re: Suicide, Depression, and Pain
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by cryingonmyporch on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 11:53:32 PM AEST
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I liked this one it is very unique and I like sad poetry so this is going to be one of my favorites.
Always
Amy |
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Re: Suicide, Depression, and Pain
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by karoody on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 03:56:15 AM AEST
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| i like this one, joel. unfortunately this is a problem too many people deal with. lost many good people to this. i like the way you described the emotions. |
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Re: Suicide, Depression, and Pain
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 06:42:00 PM AEST
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To dance the dance of death is complicated. To few fail to make the steps after learning of the truth. I'm just glad your still standing here. Don't give into the Dance. There really is not point, in the end...
YS |
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