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Happy
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 12:19:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I was not so happy because abby has no acne.
And I agree with amy because she has no acne.
I went to see andy and he got angry because he had to watch the baby.
Then I felt badly for the baby.
I know beauty is all around us, the bees and trees and flowers.
MY dog barky loves to eat beefy sticks and simply is so happy.
The bee would not leave me alone or barky so I felt so bad for barky.
I went to the city and I was carrying the daisy back home and I truly felt sorry for tricky the cat.
Then wednesday came and I had to go see a doctor.
We all love the windy days when you can fly a kite.
But most of all we love sundays because of the lord.
And that makes me happy.
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Re: Happy
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 02:03:14 PM AEST
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| LOOK TO IT MAY CONCERN IF YOU ARE GOING TO COMMENT ME ON ANY OF MY POEMS!!! PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE ME A NASTY COMMENT CAUSE SOMEONE JUST LEFT ME ONE ON MY POEM BOOKS.. AND IT WAS VERY RUDED ,, AND I DONT SEE NOTHING WITH WHAT I WRITE ON HERE. AND ANOTHER THING WHEN I GOT MY COMMENT ON MY BOOKS THE POEM I WROTE .. HE ARE SHE TOLD ME I WRITE JUNK!!:( DO I WRITE JUNK??? WELL JUST TO LET YOU KNOW I AM ON HERE FOR THE SAME REASON ALOT OF PEOPLE ARE ON HERE FOR TO WRITE POEMS.. AND I WOULDNT NEVER BE SO COLD HEARTED AS TO DO THAT TO SOMEONE ELSE THIS PERSON DID TO ME ON MY POEM BOOK .. IF YOU WANT TO SEE THE COMMENT HE ARE SHE LEFT ME GO READ IT:::: THANKS ;;;; |
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Re: Happy
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 05:04:20 PM AEST
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Another nice poem i like the way u present your writtings, honest and straight foward.
Ben |
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Re: Happy
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by eggflipper on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 06:34:19 PM AEST
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| Happiness, pure and simple can be difficult to properly articulate. It is often flighty, dancing here and there. Listen, if this is honest work and you are content in what it says, fck the person who leaves nasty comments, I for one enjoy the innocence in your voice and the way you articulate what you want to say. |
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Re: Happy
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by twick on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 11:39:04 PM AEST
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| i would like to know how old you are, that would answer a lot of questions. |
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Re: Happy
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 11:28:40 PM AEST
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Lots of happiness in your poem, thank you. It was very much fun to read. I always enjoy your writes.
Hugs from your friend,
RaquelLeah |
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Re: Happy
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by bakacaka on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 01:05:05 AM AEST
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im sorry but this poem has absolutely no focus mainly you need to write with some sort of cohesion
when i read this i laughed a lot |
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