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Helpless
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
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Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 01:25:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you know I cant stand this helplessness
this feeling
I cant control myself
its so hard to know what I know
knowing you lie
knowing that in fact
you will hurt me
maybe, you do feel as you do
you may love me
want me
need me
I know you better though
cause I know myself
we are two in a billion
so close, yet why is it I cant see?
my mind knows better
I dont want to go
I cant bear to feel this way
so uncertain
but my heart
your heart
it pulls
and I cant break away
you could shatter my heart a million times
but yet still somehow
I would manage to love you so
even if only with all the broken pieces
when you cry
you fall
I come running
though I know you would never do the same for me
but still
I must persevere
for if this is what it takes to set you free
somehow I feel it must be worth it
I made a promise to help you
and
even if it kills me
I cannot let myself fail
for you and I
we are one in the same
though I still cant see how it is
that you truly feel about me
about me
about us
love
or is it all just part of your game
I do know better
but you hold more power over me
and I am your faithful servant
eternally yours
but still,
you know I cant stand this helplessness
this feeling
I cant control myself
Copyright2006 Amanda Hope Indelicato
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Re: Helpless
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by dougnut on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:19:40 PM AEST
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I can feel the pain of this heartfelt write
it looks like one sided love and thats hard, Communication is the key I think,
Co-operation needed.
Consideration of your feelings,
concentration needed , he needs to listen to how you feel
Common sense.
my 5 cs .
graet petry or maybe i read it wrong
good luck.
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