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The End
Contributed by
thesinner
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Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 05:21:00 PM in AEST
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The end is nigh.
I feel it closing in on me.
Rapturous darkness
Beckoning me in.
Seduced by it's silence
I welcome it like a lover
This intoxicating nothingness
with it's suffocating finality
overcoming my senses
I lose myself in the moment
and drink in the heady essence
that is death.
Copyright ©
thesinner
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2006-03-02 17:21:00]
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Re: The End
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 05:29:31 PM AEST
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well written
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Re: The End
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by eggflipper on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 05:45:12 PM AEST
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| it is fun to lose oneself in a moment. Be careful not to get lost. |
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Re: The End
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 05:52:45 PM AEST
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dark and deep, such a sadness comes over in your write,
hugs
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Re: The End
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by twick on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 11:01:49 PM AEST
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| I like this one. |
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Re: The End
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 08:14:37 AM AEST
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Well done, enjoyed the read.
The Phantom |
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Re: The End
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by mickie on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:11:41 PM AEST
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sounds a whole lot like this poem i am working on called the void.
i know where you comign from, believe me.
sensational work , if i do say so myself. |
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Re: The End
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 11:41:53 PM AEST
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nice subtle rhyming scheme in the final quint-
..and I echo the sentiment in first light here:
"The end is nigh."
great beginning line to some proverbial end-
B
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