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Still To This Day
Contributed by
Cold_Blue_Eyes
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Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 05:59:15 PM in AEST
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His soft brown eyes stared back into my cold blue ones.
I had told him that i still loved him tons.
But I could tell that he still didn't understand.
This was turning out to be harder than i had planned.
I spoke to him as sofly and as gently as i could.
But still I saw tears forming in his eyes as he stood.
I told him things couldn't stay as they were.
The rest of what happend is still a blur.
He left my house with tears falling from his eyes.
I don't think i will ever forget hearing his cries.
I wiped my own tears and watched him walk away.
And I regret not running after him, still to this day.
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Re: Still To This Day
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 06:16:38 PM AEST
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this poem reminded me of when I split up with my first love, great expression through poetry,
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Re: Still To This Day
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by Lenore_Poe15 on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 06:46:32 PM AEST
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over all this was a good peom but lines like " had told him that i still loved him tons" and "The rest of what happend is still a blur" sound a little forced, but still a good poem.
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