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Death Song of Tomorrow's Sunrise
Contributed by
eggflipper
on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 09:36:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Faceless souls,
stand seated
to the smell of black roses.
Our dress,
blackened in our Sunday best.
I sit alone
next to my faceless travellers,
staring,
at the soulless face
who will soon be joined.
Tomorrow will not come
for my mortal alter-ego,
yet,
the sun will cast
its lightless shadows on a new day,
and I will always
have the time
to stop
and smell the black roses.
Copyright ©
eggflipper
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2006-03-02 21:36:14]
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Re: Death Song of Tomorrow's Sunrise
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 09:43:57 PM AEST
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I loved this .
Michelle |
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Re: Death Song of Tomorrow's Sunrise
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by twick on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 10:37:58 PM AEST
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| I thought this better than most of death poetry I've read lately. But I can't tell if you meant this to be a good outlook or bad outlook or just indifferent. The words themselves seem hollow and flat and I guess that fits for your subject matter. I found it intriguing. |
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Re: Death Song of Tomorrow's Sunrise
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by Alison on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 03:05:01 AM AEST
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i found a lot of diff meanings in what you said.
that is really great, i think that if i come back later and read this poem again i will still
find diff. means then i did before. |
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Re: Death Song of Tomorrow's Sunrise
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 07:02:46 AM AEST
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well written
NS |
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Re: Death Song of Tomorrow's Sunrise
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by thesinner on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 04:27:49 PM AEST
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i love it. It's strange to say but it sounds like something a would write.
does that make sense? |
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Re: Death Song of Tomorrow's Sunrise
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 02:09:42 AM AEST
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I really like this alot.
Amazing |
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