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Don't... You... Dare...
Contributed by
sir_odd87
on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 11:25:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Don't you dare
To tell ME who I am.
Don't you dare
To think you know me.
Don't you dare
To question my sincerity.
Don't you dare
To tell me I don't love her.
Don't you dare
To claim you want what's best for her.
Don't you dare
To be her father sometimes.
Don't you dare
To break another promise.
Don't you dare
To cross that line again.
Don't you dare
To pretend to be the man.
Don't you dare
To tell another lie.
Don't you dare
To limit her more than you'll limit yourself.
Don't you dare
To say she needs more time with you.
Don't you dare
To deny her happiness.
Don't you dare
To listen only when you want to.
Don't you dare
To not give her time to live.
Don't you dare
To not give her room to breathe.
Don't you dare
To not give her the chance to cry.
Don't you dare
To make her cry again.
DON'T... YOU... DARE!
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Re: Don't... You... Dare...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 04:46:24 PM AEST
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wow....i can feel ur anger...whoever this is about should WATCH OUT! wonderfully written, raw emotion is good in a poem
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Re: Don't... You... Dare...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:58:58 PM AEST
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Re: Don't... You... Dare...
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by Lenore_Poe15 on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 04:55:16 PM AEST
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wow good poem..... it made me mad and I don't even know who did what ha! anyway good good.
-Lenore |
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Re: Don't... You... Dare...
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 12:38:19 PM AEST
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I can feel your anger and how you are expressing yourself here. I liked it alot..
take care
christina |
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