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fade
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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bled blue and, oh so cold he waited for his love
an ex-angel with a barcode on her neck she denied her wings for him
death came reaping twice that night leaving him widowed and without a son
this world so hollow without their smiles his heart, a pool of tears
three times attempted three times denied he even fails at suicide
were their deaths mere accidents? or had his love destroyed them both?
unanswered questions and guilt took their toll so young and yet, so ***** old
his life so barren in their absence he could not bear to stay so what do you do when you're too sad to die? you simply fade away
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2003-01-29 11:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: fade
(User Rating: 1 ) by cryingonmyporch on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 11:47:16 PM AEST (User
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hey this one is nice too. Simply fade away. that was my favorite part!
Always
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Re: fade
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 10:52:40 PM AEST (User
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Wow Roy this was my favourite of yours so far. Loved it a lot very well written. I sensed a lot of pain in this. Awesome write!
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