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7DS - Envy
Contributed by
Froggy
on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:06:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Envy in life,
What's to desire...
Wanting to be someone else,
Wanting to be fake,
To point the finger at our mistakes,
Perfection is to No-one
As
Life is to hate...
Hatred for yourself
Hatred for all else,
What is so wrong,
With being who we really are,
Find someone to love,
Just for who they are...
Not for who they aren't
I am envious to none....
Copyright ©
Froggy
... [
2006-03-03 11:06:27]
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Re: 7DS - Envy
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by thisismesodeal on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:29:45 AM AEST
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Great poem, it flows nicely. Very creative topic to write about.
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Re: 7DS - Envy
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by Gigi_15 on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:33:57 AM AEST
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| wow..that's awesome! great write hon. It's very powerful.I would love to read the upcoming 6 poems:):):D |
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Re: 7DS - Envy
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:50:07 AM AEST
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| Great topic, well done |
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Re: 7DS - Envy
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by slogan on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:53:39 AM AEST
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| great write...jh |
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Re: 7DS - Envy
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:28:11 PM AEST
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good topic and I can relate to this seriously I have a jealousy problem and this is a very interesting write.. I enjoyed reading this thanks for sharing
JENNI |
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