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Dream Me
Contributed by
thepoetic1
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Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:14:06 AM in AEST
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Dream me
Let me roam into these fields
Take away the barriers of brokenness and pain
Live again, inside your head.
Know you are not dead, feel alive and well
Do not suffer a dispensible hell.
Let me Dream you, to a wonderful place;
In a space of no significance
To the tryst of dreams, the base
Held in a thought, a heathen memory,
But it is fondly remembered;
Again, this could be.
Dream me
Regardless of their trivial thoughts.
Undo them.
Let us dream of the paths on which we tail.
thepoetic1 xx
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Re: Dream Me
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by Gigi_15 on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:27:23 AM AEST
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| I think it's a nice poem..i love the ending:):) good write! |
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Re: Dream Me
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:48:06 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Dream Me
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by slogan on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:54:59 AM AEST
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| good job...jh |
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Re: Dream Me
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by shelby on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 02:58:10 PM AEST
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delightful.
michelle |
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