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Breaking Point
Contributed by
Lauren_xx12
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Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:37:08 PM in AEST
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Filled with rage,
Wanting to kick and scream!
I want to break everything in my path!
No one takes the blame,
I am betrayed,
As I sit here in my coner, alone, crying.
No one understands,
Not my feelings nor my words.
I want to break free!
Away from the tension and rage.
But when I try to fly,
My chains hold me back,
And I fall everytime.
Stumbling back up to the surface,
I see them.
Mocking me in the distance.
I return to my coner and begin to cry.
I feel helpless.
Everytime I fall, and everytime I weap.
It is harder and harder for me to get back up.
I use every ounce of strength to get back in the game of life.
But nothing changes.
I am still spit on, mocked, and bruised.
But I never shed a tear for the ones that
have done me wrong.
Copyright ©
Lauren_xx12
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2006-03-03 12:37:08]
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Re: Breaking Point
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by Franko on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 02:13:29 PM AEST
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| Wow, very emotional. Mabye a little too emotional. |
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Re: Breaking Point
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by slogan on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 02:16:36 PM AEST
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| great write...jh |
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Re: Breaking Point
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by crazy on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 05:42:09 PM AEST
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| you potray my life SO WELL.no matter how hard you try you are always pushed back down.it seems like it will never get better .i love how you were able to write this in words .magnificent job |
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Re: Breaking Point
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by twick on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 04:33:45 PM AEST
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| As I was reading this I was looking for the breaking point but I never could seem to find it. I read it again and still it wasn't there. I think this poem could go on and feels like it is not done however I commend you on the effort you put into it. Good job, keep writing |
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