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TO JUST STOP
Contributed by
crazy
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Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 05:32:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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wanting to be the one people dont see.
wishing to be someone else.
i hate being me
not trying to be anything,yet,i have become an image
to be called easy or not mean.
once opon a time,i was the quiet girl that would snap on anyone.
good bye to her forever till now
she will revisit soon enough.
the future is blank
without meaning or thought
acting to what is ecpected
i live two different lives
happy to all,yet,ashamed,sad,and lonely inside
im a different person
seeing me school or at home is extremly different
never being able to release for fear of regection
feeling as i once did
knowing how to stop the negativity,but im
not strong enough
TO JUST STOP
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crazy
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2006-03-03 17:32:17]
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Re: TO JUST STOP
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by dougnut on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:06:49 PM AEST
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Hi,
I can empathise with your feelings,
having to put on a mask for people is hard work, sounds like depression to me, but your doing something about it by putting your thoughts on paper. isused to do that, thats how i started writing poetry,
try writing your thoughts down negative and then write down a positive next to it.
it works for me.
unless i am getting the wrong message.
great rtead although sad expressive poetry
good luck.
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Re: TO JUST STOP
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by Ineedanap on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:39:22 PM AEST
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| I completelky understand what your going through. I have 3 lives. My home life, my school life, and the life i lead around my BF. It's hard to me around certain people. Sorry you've been having a bad week. Things will get better, Promise. Great write |
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Re: TO JUST STOP
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 12:21:47 AM AEST
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You're not alone.Sounds 'Crazy' just like the nickname huh? well that's what life can be like.I love the way you expres yourself,I do the same,where no one knows,where no one can see,secretive.And it feels good,but soon it will come out.Keep it up and hang in there tough.You'll get staright throught this.
Andrea |
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