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I'd rather roam alone...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 08:57:25 PM in AEST
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Id rather roam alone
And not know what to do
Than know my place in life
And roam that road with you
Id rather struggle lonely
Despising where I am
Then have you lying to me
Making my life a sham
Id rather wander aimlessly
Not sure where to go
Then have you leading me
And be stuck in that sorrow
Id rather hate what I have
Making nothing of the past
Than try my best to fix a love
Never meant to last
Id rather cry alone at night
Without you there to hear
Than let you see the sadness
And the misery I bear
Id rather be miserable
And fear the world ahead
Then try to make sense
Of everything youve said
Id rather hate myself
And hate you while Im there
Than to think that someone loves me
Or believe you that you care
Id rather be a useless ****
And make you hate me too
Id rather roam alone
Than face this world with you...
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Re: I'd rather roam alone...
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by thesinner on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:07:59 PM AEST
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| the pain comes through your words. |
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Re: I'd rather roam alone...
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:14:53 PM AEST
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very expressive write and well done indeed. I can relate to this at a point in my life thanks for sharing good job
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Re: I'd rather roam alone...
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by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:43:42 PM AEST
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wonderful poem, really honest, i loved it, hope it works out alright
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Re: I'd rather roam alone...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 12:11:49 AM AEST
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I liked it very much.Good too because you seem to say all of my story through this poem too.Hurts huh,and all you seem to run to is anger,pain,anguish.You've awaken so many things in me with this,but don't take it as something bad,it's good to know you share this too.I understand this so very well and great way to sort of ease evrything.keep it up and don't let everything decay inside fo you.....
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Re: I'd rather roam alone...
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by DarkFaerie on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 05:49:24 PM AEST
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| im the one thats sorry. i never meant to make you feel this way. im sorry. |
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Re: I'd rather roam alone...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 08:20:44 AM AEST
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| Feel the pain that you hold deep inside. Hope that one day you can love somebody else again. Good write. |
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Re: I'd rather roam alone...
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by wikedladi on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 02:18:09 PM AEST
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| Don't despair to much! you'll find someone who'll be great to you! Great write i love the ending! |
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