|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
DONT LET ANYONE KNOW (suicide)
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:30:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
*********************************************
This poem is nothing special
I know this as I write
but this poem, it will explain
whats going on in my life
Just yesterday it was
I made a very big choice
a choice to end my suffering
a choice to end my life
It was just to much to handle
Another break in my heart
I couldn't take it any longer
it was just too torn apart
I really tried to fight it
tried not to let the pain win
but its so hard to win that fight alone
without any help from a friend
It started with the cutting
just like all the times before
but it ended with the state police
breaking down my door
I took a bunch of sleeping pills
after I slashed up my skin
I washed them down with vodka
this is where the fight would begin
I tried so hard to stay awake
so hard to fight the pain
but with all the pills and alcohol
my effort was all in vain
when they talked to me I tried to lie
pretend that i was fine
but I couldn't walk, I couldn't talk
I guess that was the sign
They told took my arm and said with them
I really have to go
what was gonna happen to me?
I honestly didn't know.
They hooked me up to a bunch of machines
and shoved a tube down my throat.
They stuck the needles everywhere
as the charcoal slowly slid down, and my head began to
float.
I couldn't believe this was happening.
Why'd they have to come?
Surely just a little longer
and i would have been gone.
I layed there in the hospital bed
alone, no one around.
It hurt me so, why if no one cares anyways
why did they have to keep me above ground?
why couldn't they just let me go
release me from my pain
why must I go on living
a life I live in vain
But here I am now, the very next day
And I'm writing to let all of you know
that if really do want to end your life
DON'T LET ANYONE KNOW!
Copyright2006 Amanda Hope Indelicato
**********************************************
I say dont let anyone know cuz the reason they came is cuz a friend of mine knew i was upset and wanted to die, so she called them on me, even thou i begged her not to, she promised she didnt, but aparently she lied.........
Copyright ©
bethers_is_my_baby
... [
2006-03-04 09:30:57]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: DONT LET ANYONE KNOW (suicide)
(User Rating: 1 )
by -why_not_let_me_live- on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:44:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
it dosnt hav 2 end like this
one day i know it may seem far away but youll thank that friend
memba im here to talk if u eva wanna but i no that ppl in ur life care bout u that friend of yours wood hav let you die if she didnt |
|
|
Re: DONT LET ANYONE KNOW (suicide)
(User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 02:15:48 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| the raw emotion is so strong in this write. i understand how you feel wanting to end everything, ive been there before. but life does get better. if you need someone to talk to, im always here. |
|
|
Re: DONT LET ANYONE KNOW (suicide)
(User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 03:24:26 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This poem was hard hitting and showed alot of emotional writing power, you have a gife for useing such imagery to convay your thoughts and feelings. use it to your advantage write your pins and problems away, dont let them get you down I know that life is hard but there are better ways to live. I know you care for your friend and she truly cares for you to that is why she helped you, dont push that kind of love away accept it, it can save you. Be Well
*H_S* |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
