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Touch us All
Contributed by
Jyssvw
on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 02:02:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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On a continuum
Lay the experiences
Sequenced methodically
To represent the whole in terms of its own parts
Creativity on behalf of boredom
To reach new achievements in performance
Heighten cultural sensitivity
Competently aware of the principles which postulate truth
Thus, peace, is corrupt
Homogeneity of color scheme and word theme
Illustrations in-tune with the populations mainstream
Media hacks racketeering snap jacks crusade to the facts
The truth, again, is given back
Thus, peace, is corrupt
Grant me this favor
Take control good fortunes
A contrite, capricious, regretful soul
Abdicate pent up angers of relationally objectified hopes
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Jyssvw
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2006-03-04 14:02:19]
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Re: Touch us All
(User Rating: 1 )
by twick on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 04:22:19 PM AEST
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| I thought this was a really great poem. I can't offer any kind of constructive criticism because I think you are a better poet than I or at least this poem shows it. Anyway great job. I think this poem offers a kind of truth that many seem afraid to accept. If I'm totally wrong on this assumption please tell me. I like to be enlightened. |
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