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You
Contributed by
DarkFaerie
on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 02:21:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I loved you
With all my heart
And soul
I trusted you
But all I got
Was lies
And cold
I wanted us
To last forever
But my heart
Broke
And there's
No way to
Fix it
I was happy
But the shadows
Swallowed me
You pushed
Me away
You choose
New friends
And me
You left alone
I miss our life
Every single day
But our life
Is gone
Lost in
The decay
I wish I could
Go back
To the moment
It all started
Take you in
My arms
And make it
All better
I never wanted
My marriage
To end like this
I thought you
Were different
I thought you
Loved only me
But I was wrong
Copyright ©
DarkFaerie
... [
2006-03-04 14:21:20]
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Re: You
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by pixie on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 02:28:57 PM AEST
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wow, painful and deep. Written with such feeling, I could feel your emotions as I read this.
hugs
pix xx |
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Re: You
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 05:01:45 PM AEST
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| im sorry. im so so sorry.... |
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Re: You
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by Holli on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 07:24:17 PM AEST
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Wow....I am so sorry. I can really feel your pain through this poem. I have read your other poems as well. You are a wonderful poet.
Blessed Be,
Holli |
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Re: You
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 07:37:37 AM AEST
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| well done , an emotional write |
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Re: You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 08:16:22 AM AEST
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| Sorry for your lost hope you can find love again good poem. |
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