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TWISTED
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
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Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 01:12:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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The looks of distaste start buring me
as I walk away
I know the pityless things they think
are worse than what they say
they dont know what its like
living all these lies
they dont know how hard it is
to see things through my eyes
the world around me is twisting my thoughts
warping my mind into sickly knots
the voices in my head
tell me that I'm fine
but the road I walk on
is a thining line
the Asylum is in my future
as soon as I get caught
but they say I'm already there
and this world is all n my thoughts
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2006-03-05 13:12:04]
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Re: TWISTED
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by Forgotten_soul on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 07:37:39 PM AEST
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Re: TWISTED
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by Lilbabe on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 06:21:20 PM AEST
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i liked the lines "living all these lies" and "the asylum is in my future as soon as i get caught" mainly because i think that often. well i recognize the feelings in this poem, i guess thats why i like it...but the word choice wasnt bad either.
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