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Oceans of Regret
Contributed by
thesinner
on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 01:18:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He hauls me in.
Saving me from myself.
Anchoring me to him, as we drift
on this ocean of existence.
His arms protecting me from the tempests
and his eyes shine in their passion for me,
twin pools of azur
like the sun reflecting on the sea
dazzeling in their brilliance.
And when his lips touch mine
I taste the sweetness of his soul
and when he loved me
the earth stood still
so lost were we in each other
and I in my naivity
pushed his love away
not knowing what I had
not realizing the worth of his love.
And the wreckage of my mistake
washes upon the shores of my mind
in an endless rhythm of regret
and in it's wake, love drifts away.
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thesinner
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2006-03-05 13:18:37]
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Re: Oceans of Regret
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 01:43:51 PM AEST
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wonderful imagery...but so sad
NS |
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Re: Oceans of Regret
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 05:32:09 PM AEST
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Wow! I'm with Shari on this. Powerful use of imagery. The title
drew me to this and I was not disappointed. Excellent job!
The last four lines are stellar!
~Breezy |
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Re: Oceans of Regret
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 08:13:35 AM AEST
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| Yes, very sad but great write.....We could all learn a lesson from this write...Mike |
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