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The Storm
Contributed by
JerzeeGurl
on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 02:08:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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This storm is severe
Its winds could tear down mountains
And if you listen you could here
My heart breaking down..as fragile as porcelain
This storm...inside my soul it grows
The rain...pours down my face
I wish that I could let it go
I wish that it could be erased
This storm destroyed my happy home
For the force of nature was far to strong
The winds blew me far from him til I was alone
I never had seen a storm last so long
More rain than any hurricane
Louder than any thunder
This storm cannot be tamed
It seems like...this storm...I am forever under
Without him
There is no me
So this is the destruction I am in
Why is this happening?
Copyright ©
JerzeeGurl
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2006-03-05 14:08:18]
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Re: The Storm
(User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 06:29:04 PM AEST
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your pain becomes very apparant in this poem, and good luck getting the storm to quiet down. great write.
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Re: The Storm
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by Hoo on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 04:44:16 PM AEST
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mediocre at best... not very original i must say
but then again, neither is your name |
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