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Feelings of HappinessMoral Anguish
Contributed by
Emolaw69
on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 05:15:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We met on a site
Wasn't sure where to begin
Didn't think I had enough might
Or courage within
To talk to this guy
Who I wanted so dear
For him to be interested
In my corky appeal
I didn't want to seem too voracious
I wanted to seem impressed
I didn't want to seem uncurious
Or even obsessed
I decided I needed to meet him
No matter how far the ride
I knew it was a whim
I just had to ask with pride
So I asked if we could meet
He replied with a "yes"
He's so very sweet
Yet still I started to stress
He was way out of league
I'd have to give my all
I knew I'd catch fatigue
If I wanted to enthrall
The nerves went away
I'd set myself straight
I put myself at bay
Until he approached the gate
I looked into his eyes
And I knew I'd screw things up
As soon as he said hi
I felt like such a schlup
How could he like me?
I was nothing next to him
I needed to guarantee
My personality wouldn't cave in
The night was a blast
I had so much fun
The time passed fast
I wasn't sure what was to come
We watched t.v
Silence came fast
I felt like debris
I sabotaged the night at last
It was all my fault
I let my shyness come through
He'd never call
And I couldn't start anew
We kissed good night
Then he closed the door
I hoped the night was a delight
And that he'll want to meet more
So off I was
On my 2 hour drive
Thinking about my flaws
Just trying to survive
The excursion was extraordinary
The guy, a total prize
I hoped he felt the night was merry
And that there'll be more tries.
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Emolaw69
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2006-03-05 17:15:05]
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Re: Feelings of HappinessMoral Anguish
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by 5MinutePoet on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 08:27:36 AM AEST
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