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Sundown
Contributed by
Hoo
on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 10:18:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sundown
Reminiscing on the days events
Weeks events
Years events
This life hasnt been so bad
Take off my boots and bend my toes
Sitting
Rocking
Thinking
Stretch out my legs and take another sip
At ease
Eyeing the crowded horizon
Minutes turn to hours
The cool nights breeze hits my face
Feeling alright
Take one more pull off this cigarette
Breathe deep
Sundown
I arise
In order to retire for the night
Leaving the porch
Entering the house
The evenings last drag seems to soothe my soul
Walking past a mirror
I turn
Smile
Knowing my strengths
My weaknesses
Understanding myself
Ascending the stairs
I peer down at my hands
Visibly strong
But its only an illusion
Theyre not strong enough
For they allowed her to slip right through my grasp
A few memories stir
No true emotions felt
Too tired
Too much time spent already
Retiring to my bed
Thoughts of tomorrow
Another days work
Working hard for you
And yet
I still dont know who you are
Sunrise
Copyright ©
Hoo
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2006-03-05 22:18:59]
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Re: Sundown
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by BSteel on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 10:36:12 PM AEST
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| great start keep it up you understand higher concepts through a simple man's mind i love it |
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