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Better Days
Contributed by
chaos78
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Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 02:46:04 PM in AEST
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Wish for a better a day hoping this pain will go away.
All this hurt in my heart, I wish I never known love from the start.
Now Im watching it all fall apart. Why you have to break my heart.
Why do my love make me feel this way it all ways seem to be a rainy day.
I used to pray to GOD to take my life away, but now I pray for
BETTER DAYS..
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2006-03-06 14:46:04]
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Re: Better Days
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by Solmyr1404 on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 02:57:46 PM AEST
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don't worry, you'll make it to the better days, as long as you never give up....much of my writing is from my feelings like this, but i have made it to a point where i'm finding better days....
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Re: Better Days
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by Tacosalad on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 03:00:45 PM AEST
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| I liked it...it was short and sweet....well not really sweet ...but you get my point... |
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Re: Better Days
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by lf2300 on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 07:01:50 PM AEST
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| I liked it to it was short some poems seem go on forever. OH yeah please critqie my work also so be kind please read lol |
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