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BABY HELP ME SEE
Contributed by
be_seen
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Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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baby help me see
that you belongs to me
when my heart beats
the rythmn melodic
baby help me see
should you go away
when the sun shines during the day
so should i pray
for you to stay and make my day
baby when i could see
i saw you leaving
i saw you distaning
took our dreams away
my heart aches everyday
now i wish not to see
may you set me free...
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2003-01-29 17:40:00]
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Re: BABY HELP ME SEE
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 06:48:12 PM AEST
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| Very good touching write,Lost loves are hard but youll get through it! Christina |
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Re: BABY HELP ME SEE
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:32:59 PM AEST
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Nice write....(needs a bit of editing tho)
Jenni |
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Re: BABY HELP ME SEE
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 09:26:44 PM AEST
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| Yahoo!!! Malaysia Boleh!! Good poem my friend... |
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