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Eyelashes
Contributed by
pisces101
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Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 05:21:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Eyelashes
My lovers voice makes
The rain love me so
When he whispers
The drops sprinkle kisses
On my wrists and eyelashes
My lovers deeds set
The wind a glow
He blossoms, then condemns
The breeze to blow glistening gems
Through my hair and eyelashes
My lovers strength
Pushes the rocks into lilies
When he holds me high
The pedals flutter by
And adorn my dress and eyelashes
When he makes love to me,
The thunder speaks my name
When he touches my skin
And the jasmine clouds roll in
Across my heart and eyelashes
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Re: Eyelashes
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by Tacosalad on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 06:18:09 PM AEST
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| Awwww....I like it...It was sweet, and love-e-dovey....pft, if thats how you spell it....lol |
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Re: Eyelashes
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 12:04:30 AM AEST
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Very lyrical. Well accomplished. It's sometimes hard to hit the right note in romantic poetry, but you've done so here, methinks.
Keep it up.
Andrew |
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