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Still She Sleeps
Contributed by
eggflipper
on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 07:41:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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He walks to the window,
uncertain of the Word's wisdom.
Yet,
she continues her safety
with the symbolic nature.
The knowledge of a lifetime
never equipped him to comprehend.
Just another man who misunderstood Jesus.
His shoulders,
carry inadequacies for the pillow.
His warmth,
jealous of the blankets.
Musical interludes
interrupt the momentary transgressions.
A flashback
reminds him of destiny.
The revelation of a momentary man
forces him to relive history,
void of its moments,
alive in its emotions.
Yet,
still she sleeps,
safe,
warm,
in love.
She awakes to cast loving eyes on the sailor.
Frozen for a moment,
then realizes love will never destroy,
Peter returns to her side.
Copyright ©
eggflipper
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2006-03-06 19:41:07]
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Re: Still She Sleeps
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by thesinner on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 09:31:49 PM AEST
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| pure and honest. |
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Re: Still She Sleeps
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 12:26:40 AM AEST
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Intriguing! Excellent styling, and a well-told message. Keep it up.
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Re: Still She Sleeps
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 06:12:23 PM AEST
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| Sad and honest, confessional in parts. Solid poetry with the most important feature included-Art. |
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Re: Still She Sleeps
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:43:32 PM AEST
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this was a very captivating write.
i thoroughly enjoyed it.
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