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this is something disturbed
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 06:56:10 PM in AEST
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a classic display of violence we play
we follow the lime light high
we all want what other have
we all want to touch and own the sky
we harvest the weak and tarnish the meak
all in the name of gold
while killing the poor and and acting the whore
we bury all the old
climbing my tomb i darken my room to let in the works of wise
blinded by sin the little me wins
and slowly my spirit dies
feeling left out and swimming in doubt
i look to the word
but something inside wants to hide
it doesnt want to be heard
but i listen
i want to win
this is something disturbed
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Re: this is something disturbed
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by boobiepeach on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 07:09:11 PM AEST
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wow this is powerful
a wonderful write
"while killing the poor and and acting the whore
we bury all the old"
i love this
great job
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Re: this is something disturbed
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:48:44 PM AEST
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Claps!
Very cleverly done! |
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Re: this is something disturbed
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by Faust on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:20:08 PM AEST
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I'm proud of you and I don't know you. You've caught the essence of mankind in one poem. You should be very proud of yourself for doing that.
Eternally Punished,
Faust |
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