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Crossroads
Contributed by
moses
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Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 08:35:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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An inviting warm whisper in your ear
tells you excactly what you want to hear.
We were sparks to start now we're a roaring fire.
Together we've taken eachother higher.
Everything looked so perfect from far away.
I knew just what to say,
when we met that day at our crossroads.
Now we lie so secure,
dreaming thoughts and of times so pure.
Our colors were only thousands shades of gray.
Together they've become such a beautiful array.
Our love blossomed like a flower in spring.
You are the only thing I've ever been sure of -
With you, I just have pure love.
You're the first one I haven't run from.
Now I stand back to admire the fire we've become,
it's such natural perfection.
Our flowers stem from such an undeniable connection.
I'm so glad I found my way that day
when we met at our crossroads.
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moses
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Re: Crossroads
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by thesinner on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:48:51 PM AEST
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| Very touching. Well done |
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Re: Crossroads
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by funnyface on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:03:11 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE !!!
YOUR FRIEND FUNNYFACE |
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Re: Crossroads
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:24:35 PM AEST
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~*Moses*~
A beautiful, touching and heart warming write. You have done a fine job with this one.
Now I stand back to admire the fire we've become,
it's such natural perfection.
Our flowers stem from such an undeniable connection
It's an awesome feeling when you have found the perfect love. May it last forever my dear friend.
*love n hugs from ur fan/friend*
~*sue*~ |
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Re: Crossroads
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by Winterland on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 11:24:20 PM AEST
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Very nice poem. I especially enjoyed the vivid imagery.
Jennifer |
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Re: Crossroads
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by Alison on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 08:16:40 PM AEST
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| that makes me very happy for u! great poem! |
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Re: Crossroads
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by DarkFaerie on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 08:39:10 PM AEST
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| Wow, such a unique look at being in love. I loved it. : ) |
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Re: Crossroads
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 06:11:17 AM AEST
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simply heavenly, beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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