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To Much
Contributed by
Amazon
on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:01:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sometimes the weight of the world is just to much
I shiver in side and back away from your touch
there are times when I fall
wonder is the constant fight is worth it all
but I think of what it would do to those around me who care
and I know to screw up there lives to, I wouldnt dare
so for them I must be strong
keep fighting and holding on
but even when I forget the others
would like to know what it is that really bothers
what sickens me the most is that I lack the courage
I have thought of a thousand ways but not one can or will I follow threw
everyone tells me to let then in, that they can help
but to let them in would be damning them to my own personal hell
and that I cant do, I can hardly stand it myself
if I were able to id be a hazard to my own health
sometimes I want to run away
from myself anyway
my family though not the best
I can deal with just like the rest
but the thoughts that run threw my head
thinking that the only peace ill find will when im dead
I am losing control of my own brain
this world is driving me insane
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Re: To Much
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:47:16 PM AEST
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Hey, you express yourself well. I can relate to a lot of the feelings you have expressed here. I also like the fact that your poetry is very straightforward and easy to understand. I dislike most "frilly" poetry that talks about clouds and rainbows and corny stuff like that. You have a simple, but powerful quality. I invite you to check out my myspace page at:
http://www.myspace.com/kellymagovern
I read that you like vampires and horror. So do I. C-ya! |
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Re: To Much
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by diablohate on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 12:11:40 AM AEST
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the reason why is simple
the reason for you is complex
lokk in your mind
and you will see
dying now
will only bring pain to
the ones you love you the most
(but before you go pick a faith-of fire or water)
very good, very good indeed
you will go far. |
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Re: To Much
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by diablohate on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 12:12:24 AM AEST
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the reason why is simple
the reason for you is complex
look in your mind
and you will see
dying now
will only bring pain to
the ones you love you the most
(but before you go pick a faith-of fire or water)
very good, very good indeed
you will go far. |
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