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This Bottles Charm
Contributed by
EVERxSOxSWEET
on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:01:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Dark skies bring nothing but pain,
For when the sun sets, theres nothing to gain.
While you dream, in your pretty little bed,
Im stuck in this hell, tormented by the thoughts in my head.
After all these hours spent alone in this cold silence
My only escape is through drugs and violence.
My brain is numb from this bodily harm,
But i cant resist this bottles charm.
Copyright ©
EVERxSOxSWEET
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2006-03-07 22:01:47]
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Re: This Bottles Charm
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:52:32 PM AEST
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| "This bottle's charm": I've never thought of addiction using that metaphor. I like it! Good stuff. |
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Re: This Bottles Charm
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by freespirit on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 11:55:55 PM AEST
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hello
I have written a lot of poems about drugs
and yes you can escape look within you self
good write
God bless freespirt |
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Re: This Bottles Charm
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by Alina on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:08:21 PM AEST
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So much said in so little of words...good jobs
ALINA |
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Re: This Bottles Charm
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by Alina on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:08:28 PM AEST
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So much said in so little of words...good jobs
ALINA |
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Re: This Bottles Charm
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by Alina on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:08:39 PM AEST
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So much said in so little of words...good jobs
ALINA |
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Re: This Bottles Charm
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by no_1nos_me on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 01:50:54 PM AEST
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| as one who has fallen for that and other charms I have to say that this writing was amazing |
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Re: This Bottles Charm
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by In_a_while on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 07:03:11 PM AEST
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My brain is numb from this bodily harm
but i can't resist this bottles charm.
Great writing, wonderful imagery and playful rhyme
have
been placed along side the very worst of afflictions
keep up the excellent writing and the best of luck.
dw |
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