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Frisky's first day at school
Contributed by
freespirit
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Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 12:25:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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It eight in the morning and there is a knock at the door
Why its Benny the weasel and hes ready to go
Now Frisky he has his lunch all packed
A few acorns for an afternoon snack
Hay Benny? Have you see Hoot around
Nope hes not in the tree and hes not on the ground
Oh well lets get going before we are late
Maybe he slept in oh thats just great
Frisky do you think school will be fun
Sure Benny and we will make lots of new friends
The Teachers are nice and they let you play games
Hay frisky there hoot and he have got his glasses on
Hay you guys wait for me
Written by
Dorothy Calvert
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Re: Frisky's first day at school
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by wizard on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 09:57:03 AM AEST
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a nice write..a real smile provoker!
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Re: Frisky's first day at school
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 07:23:42 AM AEST
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mmmmmmmm what I dont get is how can
you tell me I write JUNK!! when to me no animal can go to school!! duh... hehehe .. so learn how to wrote poetry ... lol cause to me no animal can go to school!!!!! so when you write something make sure it makes scense and not like this lol like you told me.. maybe you should read more books that way you will learn how to write poetry and not JUNK!!! REMEMBER WHEN YOU WROTE THAT COMMENT WELL!!!!!
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Re: Frisky's first day at school
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 11:26:26 PM AEST
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This is cute i love the feeling i get reading these remind of my child hood school days. a lovely poem.
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Re: Frisky's first day at school
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 07:01:01 PM AEST
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This is a nice cute little story an god knows our children need innocent stories now days. You dear lady keep writing.
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Re: Frisky's first day at school
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 01:49:49 PM AEST
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Excellent write....too cute.
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