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Hot Bread
Contributed by
DreamPoetess
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Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 04:14:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Here I gather before you
These fine ingredients
Fresh milled flour
From wheat berries,
And silver shining sugar
I opened up my food sack
For this special recipe,
Leavened with love
The temperature is hot,
It is what I set it too
Before I sifted and mixed
The white fluffy clouds,
To raise up this food to eat.
Meagan
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2006-03-08 04:14:53]
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Re: Hot Bread
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:50:13 AM AEST
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What a lovely declaration. Literal, unpretentious, with a cadence as smoothly blended as the ingredients themselves. bravo!
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Re: Hot Bread
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 09:30:33 AM AEST
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U know U r an artist plus home maker and writter, i'll say one thing , martha stewart has nothing on u lol. what a cleaver and lovely poem and way 2 present it, 1st poem i ever tasted lol. realy lovely write. welcome back.
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Re: Hot Bread
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by ButchHoward on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 02:21:02 PM AEST
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Meagan, I love the way your write! Your work makes me remember "sweet things -long forgotten." I can almost smell the aroma! Nice write!
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