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I Wonder
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 02:42:49 PM in AEST
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The mask I wear is pale and cold
A loving man with a wounded soul,
The gruesome face, my thoughts misplaced,
I search for love but find none,
Its cold outside as the rain subsides
I wonder the streets in search of peace,
From the start a boy born with a broken heart,
Clouded by shame, and so Ive taken this name,
Phantom the poet, the praise I receive Im not sure I deserve it,
The ink contacts the paper and my hand is on the move,
Rhyme after rhyme the flow so smooth,
If I was given the gift to write, why should I try and fight,
Is it time for me to put down the pen, has my poetry come to an end,
Its been eighteen years, has my work finally fallen on deaf ears,
Has my prime come to pass, shall I start anew by removing my mask
Should I bury The Phantom and see the world from Kanes point of view?
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: I Wonder
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by trini on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 04:40:33 PM AEST
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Wow. Tis true as you speak it. you have a gift. one thing though, don't stop writing. my ears are open. I hope to see more. keep up the spectacular work.
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Re: I Wonder
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:54:52 PM AEST
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I myself would sorely miss the Phantom ...I vote he keeps entrahling us with his writes
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