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A Ghosty Tale
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 04:52:51 PM in AEST
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Wake up said a voice, did I feel a hand,,
I live all alone so dont understand,
I open my eyes, heart gripped with fear,
I squint in the dark,as a figure floats near,
heart starts to pound, body goes numb,
I try to scream out, but no sound will come,
I try in the dark to adjust my eyes,
I then realize that im paralized,
I lay in my bed, my mouth feels so dry,
I manage to let out, a small muffled cry,
I slide out the bed and slump to the floor,
terrified stare at the thing near the door,
I get to my feet and run to the light,
I lash out at the spectre with all ofl my might,
It jumps at me wraps round my head,
I stumble back and fall on my bed,
I fight back screaming, and then start to frown,
im having a fight, with my dressing gown,
what a relief, never no more,
will I hang that.. on the bedroom door..
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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2006-03-08 16:52:51]
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Re: A Ghosty Tale
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by drtylilsecret on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:58:46 PM AEST
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lol omg i absolutely loved it! Whoa, so suspenceful in the beginning, and then the ending..... haha amazing job, awesome poem.
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Re: A Ghosty Tale
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 10:40:08 PM AEST
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*giggles* Wonderful.
I love this, it seems so...worrying, at the start, and then it's just really funny. Very good. I like how you've made it seem like that. I can really tell what you were feeling.
Anyway, good use of launguage and rhyme. I like how you wrote this.
Nice write,
*hugs*
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Re: A Ghosty Tale
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by Manda2 on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:58:09 PM AEST
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I remember being petrified of my...dressing gown hanging on the door! A brilliant poem,
xx well done. |
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Re: A Ghosty Tale
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by maestar on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 10:17:43 AM AEST
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| its really funny, well done |
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Re: A Ghosty Tale
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:41:07 AM AEST
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Well i didn't expect that! lol
J |
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