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I Dare You ((#2))
Contributed by
Drapes
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Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 10:47:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I dare you to listen.
I dare you to feel, I dare you to care. I dare you to wake up from your pretty princess dream. I dare you to look in the mirror, I dare you to cry. I dare you to look in the mirror and cry. I dare you to slit your wrists. I dare you to bash your head against the wall until you can't see. I dare you to bite your tongue until it bleeds. I dare you to hear the truth, I dare you to tell the truth, I dare you to believe the truth. I dare you to worry. I dare you to be concerned. I dare you to SHUT YOUR MOUTH. I dare you to forget about YOURSELF. I dare you to stop. I dare you to stop pretending. I dare you to be real. I dare you to be a real person, I dare you to be a real acquaintance, I dare you to be a real friend.
I dare you. Are you up for the challenge?
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Drapes
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Re: I Dare You ((#2))
(User Rating: 1 ) by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 07:23:16 PM AEST (User
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oh that was great. i haven't read the 1st yet but i'll have to find it. So angry, so forceful... you wrote it brilliantly though, i absolutely loved it.
~natalya |
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Re: I Dare You ((#2))
(User Rating: 1 ) by Drapes on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 11:31:02 PM AEST (User
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I haven't posted the first one yet. I'm still working on it. I knew it might confuse people if I said this was # 2 without # 1 but it would confuse me more!! lol Thanks for the comment!! It's always appreciated!! |
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Re: I Dare You ((#2))
(User Rating: 1 ) by ChaosFactor on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 08:58:15 AM AEST (User
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This is truly incredible.. So forceful and real. I love it. |
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