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~Muscadine & Mulberry~
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
Anticipating vision I
always love to light a
candle
In darkest nights all
alone many aspirations to
handle
Though tonight instead of
inspirational Mulberry I
missed
'Twas a burnt finger in
starting flames- my own I
kissed
Firelight glow helps my mind
to see all of imaginations
ways
Still stands lucid time when
upon crystal mellow flare I
gaze
Once more to lighting the
wick now of Muscadine for
flames
Thinking...dreaming; of Love
don't you know it went out
again
Finger now hot- waning desire
to smell sweetly the scent of
rhymes
Enter wafting thoughts of
Muscadine and Mulberry
sublime.
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Copyright ladyfawn 2001
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
... [
2003-01-30 04:00:00]
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Re: ~Muscadine & Mulberry~
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by venkat on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 04:43:55 AM AEST
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| very lucid.. weldrawn, a song beautiful..thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts in this poem.. venkat |
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Re: ~Muscadine & Mulberry~
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 10:38:31 AM AEST
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Nessa,
This is to me very flowingly(is this a word? I think not but it should be!) peaceful, it's very clear and dreamy! I think you'll know what I mean by this, it sort of makes ones mind clear and also fuzzy together after reading! I like it alot! Don't know if it's the thought of stinky candles(Hehe) or it's peacfulness or both and more? And watch ya fingers next time!
Anyway I like!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: ~Muscadine & Mulberry~
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 11:39:27 AM AEST
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AAAHHH THe sweet smell of those sents burning I just love it! & like this write!
Great job! Christina |
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Re: ~Muscadine & Mulberry~
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 02:54:06 PM AEST
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Mulberry and Muscadine
Not my reverie or scene
but wiih you I like to linger
(sorry that you burned your finger)
it's so nice to come and find
ladyfawn's peace of mind. |
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Re: ~Muscadine & Mulberry~
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by karoody on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:08:02 PM AEST
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| Very good....you seem to have plenty around to help you find smiles and peace, which is much deserved. |
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