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The Raging Storm
Contributed by
bibi
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Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 07:15:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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A storm is raging so deep inside The surge it builds flows from my eyes I fill the dam it's overflowing I can't contain my heart's exploding This storm that rages within my soul Floods my being There's no control The winds of sadness from days of yore Wreak their havoc upon memories stored as anger strikes it sears the heart Thunder rumbles I fall apart In bits and pieces broken and torn I'm washed away Who will mourn?
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Re: The Raging Storm
(User Rating: 1 ) by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 07:21:10 PM AEST (User
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oh wow, such a dark and passionate write. Flowed perfectly, really smoothly and you described everything just right. Fantastic write i loved it.
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