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Ice Cream and Antidepressants
Contributed by
MyNameIsJonas
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Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 08:18:15 PM in AEST
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Reaching for thoughts from the depths of my mind
Searching for all of those that I could find
Seeing the foregone events of my life
Remembering the past's problems and strife
Wondering if the path thats been chosen
Was really correct; now it seems frozen
Without a second thought I pick that path
Now all thats left seems to be unknown wrath
I am falling in a bottomless pit;
Questions if you hear the cries I emit
These worries don't appear to have ending
Just like the fall it is never-ending
Descending further, a bright light appears
It is your smile and it brings me to tears
Copyright ©
MyNameIsJonas
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2006-03-11 20:18:15]
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Re: Ice Cream and Antidepressants
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by DarkFaerie on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 08:44:20 PM AEST
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Wonderful write.
Wondering if the path that’s been chosen
Was really correct; now it seems frozen
These lines really spoke to me. Keep up the great work. : ) |
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Re: Ice Cream and Antidepressants
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 11:22:12 PM AEST
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as long as you have breath, and a heartbeat, you can still find new paths. There is always hope.. love your poem, really like the title.
hugs, raquelLeah |
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Re: Ice Cream and Antidepressants
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:25:58 AM AEST
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| Kevin, The title was excellent, that's what caught my eye. The write was really good as well. The first stanza was my favorite. Peace, Laura |
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Re: Ice Cream and Antidepressants
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 09:21:27 PM AEST
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very well expressed
NS |
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Re: Ice Cream and Antidepressants
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by jonquilcottage on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 10:27:48 PM AEST
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| this was a lovely poem and very thought provoking thanks |
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