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Painful Uncertainty
Contributed by
MyNameIsJonas
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Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 10:47:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I won't ever know if you don't tell me
Things just seem strange from what they use to be
I wish I could read your thoughts just to see
Your truest intentions of you and me
The inspiration is overflowing
Feelings for me are not really showing
Of course Ill never know until you say
Anything when I ask, "How was your day?"
Walking you to class; the awkward silence
Trying to speak; you reply in violence
I seriously don't know what is wrong
If you spoke out, but the silence is long
I wait here and think, until we will meet
Until that fateful day, my heart will beat
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2006-03-11 22:47:47]
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Re: Painful Uncertainty
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 10:52:35 PM AEST
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| I can feel your pain and it does hurt when people don't open up but sometimes they just need time and will when they are ready. Hope everything gets better in your relationship. |
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Re: Painful Uncertainty
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by Alison on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 11:12:54 PM AEST
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| hold on with all you've got! it might get better soon! |
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Re: Painful Uncertainty
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 11:32:24 PM AEST
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Until then, keep busy. The other person is having to deal with things too, give them time, they will come around. Be patient. Very nice poem. Another great title. I like the final couplet at the end of your sonnet. I used to write the italian sonnet.... abba abba cdecde . Great job on yours. welcome to YPDC.
hugs, raquelLeah |
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Re: Painful Uncertainty
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 11:47:57 PM AEST
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great poem, i like the emotions and sadness here...--I wait here and think, until we will meet
Until that fateful day, my heart will beat-- these are my favorite lines and a strong way to end this! nice write i hope it gets better soon! A++++ |
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Re: Painful Uncertainty
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by DarkFaerie on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:06:42 AM AEST
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Wow, great job. Another amazing write.
I wish I could read your thoughts just to see
Your truest intentions of you and me
These lines spoke to my heart. Keep up the good work. : ) |
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