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a 2 sided poem
Contributed by
grim6669
on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 02:27:47 PM in AEST
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She tears him down
she lives it up
she loves it when
he knows he's ******
she uses him
he loves her so
this poor used guy
can't let her go
his heart aches confusion
he doesn't know why
some girl had to barge in
controlling his life
he tries so hard
to work things out
ignoring him
she screams and she shouts
this stupid girl
caused all of his pain
she's the reason
he's going insane
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He does some things
he shouldn't do
these things hurt him
they hurt her too
she can't bare to watch
her love die slowly
so she leaves the room
her love gets lonley
she's mad but yet
she's so confused
she doesn't know
what else to do
she hurts herself
so he can see
that what he does
scars easily
until he stops
she's on the floor
crying while
she bleeds some more
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Re: a 2 sided poem
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 03:00:42 PM AEST
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| show some damn consideration and comment already god!... |
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Re: a 2 sided poem
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 07:33:44 PM AEST
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i have no idea why people haven't commented yet but i absolutely loved it. Flowed perfectly, and the poem was really heart-felt, a little anger and sadness from both sides i though.... great write anyway.
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Re: a 2 sided poem
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by Jim-Torres on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 12:20:42 PM AEST
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| a very good right. i like that it had two poems of the other person's point of view. i like this alot. |
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Re: a 2 sided poem
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by deadclown on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 09:24:11 AM AEST
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| Liked the way you wrote this.Something different |
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Re: a 2 sided poem
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by Sheveg on
Sunday, 27th June 2010 @ 12:27:35 PM AEST
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It doesn't sound like a good relationship for either of you. Sad.
Sherry |
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