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try again, average doesn't become you
Contributed by
twick
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Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 04:07:29 PM in AEST
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What's wrong with this picture
nothing but really everything
Every shade is a little off hue
Every brushstroke a little forced
It's a pretty little landscape
its just lacking heart.
This painter is no artist
I know hearing that is the hardest
But what did you expect
it takes bleeding and seething
and you're painting happy little trees
I'm hoping that you aren't hoping that this was your masterpiece
Take a minute to breathe
contemplate this reality
go walk around, stop for coffee
and do it while listening to the heartbeat.
It's not all about life, death, or love
make it what you want
That will be worth waiting for
and waiting we will be.
Copyright ©
twick
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2006-03-12 16:07:29]
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Re: try again, average doesn't become you
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 07:24:31 PM AEST
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rather confusing, but on some level i kinda get what it was supposed to mean....i loved it, beautifully written.
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