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That Little Boy Inside
Contributed by
lonely_boy
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Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:16:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I have a little boy inside me that wants to get out He wants to have a good time He wants to scream and shout Then I met these guys that gave me some drugs That little boy inside me said I shouldnt do it But I ignored him and as I smoked I shrugged I met this girl that I really liked a lot I told her that I loved her and gave her my heart Though that little boy inside me said that somethings not right I never listened to him until that ***** left me that night I started cutting myself because of this sadness And that little boy inside me didnt understand why I wrote poems about how I felt and how I wanted to die The little boy inside me said that therell be a brighter day Only when I was done cutting myself did I listen I met this new girl and she made me feel better But that little boy inside me didnt say anything about her So I thought nothing of it and I asked her out Still no word of the little boy inside me Then she left and I laid there crying in my room That little boy inside me said I would be fine I didnt listen because I felt my heart was dead So I started cutting deeper and didnt really care That little boy inside me just stayed quiet I met another girl that was better than the rest She was the only one to say that she loved me Though for some odd reason I wanted to ask that little boy for advice But that little boy inside me is dead
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Re: That Little Boy Inside
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:20:21 PM AEST (User
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This is such a sad and very emotional pieace it put tears to my eyes.
If you ever need to talk kiddo PM me ok. |
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Re: That Little Boy Inside
(User Rating: 1 ) by White_Raven on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 08:04:24 AM AEST (User
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That is indeed very sad. |
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Re: That Little Boy Inside
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lionel on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 01:09:01 PM AEST (User
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You committed quite a sin; doing the little boy in. He was really nice, and gave good advice; For his years, very mature, and you still need him, I'm sure. But you cut him one time too many, now, his good advice, you want get any. You're on your on, my friend, you committed the unpardonable sin. ( I'm kidding, of course)
God bless
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Re: That Little Boy Inside
(User Rating: 1 ) by ButchHoward on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:43:57 PM AEST (User
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I don't think the little boy inside you is really dead. He is just very pis*ed off. He is trying to tell you not to hurt yourself. "The child is father to the man." Good write!
Butch |
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