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1364.55
Contributed by
moldwarp
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Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 03:40:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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ambiguous intent
your brown skin
conflicting such bleached coral
of mine
only in reverie
my movements
swaying and dominated
by your moods
where such a feminist used to be
if you say so
i would cut off my most
dependable foot
to make room
for your achilles' heel
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moldwarp
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2006-03-13 15:40:02]
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Re: 1364.55
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 10:53:48 PM AEST
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Ah, good work here. It's simple, no overabundance of words, but that's just what it needed, I think. The last stanza is most telling.
Oddly titled, though. But excellent work.
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