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Hour Glass
Contributed by
Shadow
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Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 09:19:01 PM in AEST
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Empty as the bottle,
In my shells hand
Broken like thousand shards
Of glass upon black sand
My hour glass
Was before me
I see it drifting by
I smile as the glass shatters
There the black sand lies
My soul is flung from me
Among the swirling mass
An endless line of souls
That god himself has cast
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Shadow
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2006-03-13 21:19:01]
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Re: Hour Glass
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by brew on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 09:35:35 PM AEST
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This is a well constructed write. I loved the images that it gave. So real... and sad. Yes, it portrayed you were missing something, and i think.(my own opinion) is inner peace. Maybe a lil more, yet thats the feel i got when reading. DId really like what I read, tho.
Good talent.
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