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A taste of Oblivion
Contributed by
desolated_denial
on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 12:58:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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That unrequitted Special Place
Darkness, untainted
Engulf me in your suffocation,
Take me once again.
That little taste of freedom,
that little taste of freedom,
That little taste of freedom ...
... it's not that far ...
Unexpected place,
Untamed, damned space.
Take me once again
Delve in the purest darkness
Dive in once again.
The unknown; untouched by man
That little taste of freedom once again
Stare into that open space
Summited so completely
All the glaring signs around me
So alien to the bone
So touch me once again - the darkness
Pure in every sense
Fill my fingers with suffocation
I'm alien to myself
I feel nothing
I taste nothing
I am nothing
And I don't seem to mind
That little taste of freedom,
That little taste of freedom,
That little taste of freedom,
... it's not that far ...
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Re: A taste of Oblivion
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by eggflipper on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 02:28:02 PM AEST
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| Very wishful writing. |
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Re: A taste of Oblivion
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 03:14:39 PM AEST
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| interesting write i like the sceam of this write ty for the post |
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Re: A taste of Oblivion
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 12:06:19 AM AEST
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| I like this a lot! The words you used were really powerful. |
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